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On a monday night when it was very stormy outside a young girl was up playing late at 3 am in the morning without anyone knowing she heard a knock at her window not to mention she was two stories up from the ground she called her mother… no answer so she opens her curtains and… nothing? She thinks for a minute what if it was just a bird or if it was a psycho. she walks down stairs to her mother and father's room. she noticed they’re not here they’re they go out every saturday so she walks upstairs and goes to sleep.

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